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A poem by me
I have to write 5 poems for my creative writing class and here's one of em.
(not gonna lie, i make myself laugh lol) Roses are red Roses are red, Violets are red too Wait, I messed up.ROSES ARE… RED So far nothing ascueVIOLETS ARE… Think, man, flex your IQ…VIOLETS ARE… EUREKA! At last, a break through!Violets are… RED! … fuck it, I quit. |
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| 09-30-2009, 12:09 AM | #6 |
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My version...
Roses are red Roses are red, Violets are too Hold on a minute.ROSES ARE… RED So far nothing's askewVIOLETS ARE… Crap, hold on again, forgot to wipe after poo…VIOLETS ARE… OK, all's well, the dark star is clean!Violets are… CRAP! … OK, who forgot to replace the roll of toilet paper? |
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| 09-30-2009, 12:48 AM | #9 |
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lol, that is good! Here's my version.
roses are red, violets are too. no, wait a minute, violets are blue. But violet is violet, violet's not blue, i'm about to get violent on this poem for you. so wait, try again, last time will do.... roses are red, violets are violet. dammit, they're blue, I just recognized it. these violets are spiteful, and laughing at you. This floral fiasco is making me postal, oh wait what's that sound? the garbage disposal. |
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| 09-30-2009, 02:26 PM | #13 | |
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| 09-30-2009, 02:49 PM | #15 |
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rose are red...
violets are blue... i smell a fart... and i think its you. /thread
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they're good for your heart the more you eat the more you- is that right, is that the part? the part that I say, the more you fart? maybe it's not me, and i'm just not smart but i guess beans can make a man fart this poem is lame, and OP's a retard!  jk! |
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| 09-30-2009, 11:58 PM | #17 | |
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I'm a product of the Bronx, and I drive an M3. Roses be red and violets are blue, Grey goose and tonic, for my lady, one malibu. A rolex on the right, switching lanes with the left. I charge black on amex, signed with respect. A cash money king, a tower of power, the fees are fifty percent, paid in cash every hour. Now them cats might ask was your success simply meant, its the spirit inside brother, you must never relent. Still somewhat confused, and ask can this be??? I'll write you a book and sign it: Best Wishes, Mike C not really a poem....but i figured i'd bust a rhyme or 2...hahahhaha
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| 10-01-2009, 02:13 AM | #20 |
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The Liquor Section of Albertsons
Time begins with apprehension
The liquor section of Albertsons A golden bottle on a rack of many The liquor section of Albertsons Do I really want another night with the Captain The liquor section of Albertsons I regret my decision The liquor section of Albertsons My fate is sealed. The liquor section of Albertsons Time has passed. The hour come. FML The liquor section of Albertsons Taht wansr ser baad! Wooohio! Partray!!1 Teh liqour sevction at a albeertsons. |
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I like the original. I just thought it needed more poo.
